【改错精选120练】GMAT官方讲解SC难点实例分析（一百零四练）

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摘要：GMAT句子改错题是整个GMAT考试中对考生英语语法能力考查要求最高的题型，需要考生具备扎实的语法基础和一定的逻辑分析能力。本文将结合实例分析讲解GMAT句子改错题的解题思路和方法技巧。

GMAT句子改错题(sentence correction)，是整个GMAT考试中对考生英语语法能力考查要求最高的题型，也往往是中国学生最为头疼的一类题目。没有扎实的语法基础和一定的逻辑分析能力，想要做好句子改错题难度极高。如何提升GMAT句子改错题的解题能力?下面小编就为大家整理了一些经典例题，结合实例分析为大家讲解GMAT句子改错题的解题思路和方法技巧。

实例题目：

Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.

(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,

(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter

(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations

(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

选项分析：

(A)Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,

【错误】句子意思：“in her book illustrations(在她的插图中)”是主谓结构“Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized……”的状语，“carefully coordinating them with her narratives”是谓语动词“capitalized”的伴随修饰。因此“carefully coordinating them with her narratives(把

插图与叙述结合)”这个动作是在状语“in her book illustrations(在她的插图中)”的修饰下发出的。但这并不合理，因为“插图”中没有“叙述”，因此“把插图与叙述结合”这个动作并不应发生在“在她的插图中”这个狭小的范围内，而应是更广的如“在她的书中”的范围内发生，因此状语“in her book illustrations”和“carefully coordinating them with her narratives”不应处于同一个主谓结构之中。

(B)In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter

【错误】句子意思：见(A)。

(C)In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter

【正确】由于两者不在同一个主谓结构中，“In her book illustrations”不再会修饰到“coordinated”，表意合理。

【大意】在她的书的插图中，那些她拿来和她的叙述结合的插图，Beatrix Potter突显了她对自然世界的热切观察与热爱

(D)Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations

【错误】修饰成分：“Carefully coordinated with her narratives”就近修饰“Beatrix Potter”，但这并不合理，因为本句的本意并不是“Beatrix Potter”被与“her narratives(她的叙述)”结合在一起，和“her narratives”结合的应该是“illustrations(插图)”。

(E)Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

【错误】句子意思： “carefully coordinated them with her narratives(把插图与叙述结合)”这个动作是在状语“in her book illustrations(在她的插图中)”的修饰下发出的。但这并不合理，因为“插图”中没有“叙述”，因此“把插图与叙述

结合”这个动作并不应发生在“在她的插图中”这个狭小的范围内，而应是更广的如“在她的书中”的范围内发生，因此状语“in her book illustrations”和“carefully coordinated them with her narratives”不应处于同一个主谓结构之中。

解题思路：

根据修饰关系不合理可以排除(D)，其余选项只能根据“In her book illustrations”和“coordinate”位置关系的变化分析句意，只有(C)中“In her book illustrations”作主句的状语，“coordinate”出现在“in which”引导的从句中，两者互不干扰，表意合理，因此选择(C)。