GMAT写作高分范文转写技巧实例精讲 手把手教你优化文章词句冲4分

2018年04月10日18:00 来源：小站整理

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GMAT作文高分不仅仅取决于文章的整体结构和逻辑思维，如何使用好词汇和句子也同样重要。很多同学虽然有着不错的英语写作基础，好词妙句的储备也可说充足，却往往因为不恰当的使用反而拖累了作文的整体得分。下面小编就为大家详细介绍一些GMAT高分作文中词句的用法，并通过改写对比帮助大家分析理解其中奥妙。

避免使用语意弱的“be”动词

1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如：

原文：The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab.

改写：The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语)Or: The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语)

2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。例如：

1) 原文：The team members are good players.

改写：The team members play well.

2) 原文：One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness.

改写：One worker's plan eliminates tardiness.

3、在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中，把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。例如：

1) 原文：There is no opportunity for promotion.

改写：No opportunity for promotion exists.

2) 原文：Here are the books you ordered.

改写：The books you ordered have arrived.

多用语意具体的动词，保持句意简洁明了

例如：

1、原文：My supervisor went past my desk.

改写：My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.

2、原文：She is a careful shopper.

改写：She compares prices and quality.

尽量运用主动语态

例如：

1、原文：The organization has been supported by charity.

改写：Charity has supported the organization.

2、原文：The biscuits were stacked on a plate.

改写：Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.

防止使用语意冗长累赘的词语

例如：

1、原文：My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.

改写：My little sister prefers chocolate milk.

2、原文：We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.

改写：We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.

3、原文：We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.

改写：We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.

4、原文：My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different stores.

改写：My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores.

杜绝滥用陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语

例如：

1、原文：They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.

改写：They will not agree to any of his proposals.

2、原文：I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall.

改写：I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall.

以上就是关于GMAT写作中一些好词妙句的正确用法分析介绍，希望大家能结合文中内容提升自己的写作技巧，在GMAT写作部分写出高分作文。