【改错精选120练】GMAT官方讲解SC难点实例分析（六十八练）

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摘要：GMAT句子改错题是整个GMAT考试中对考生英语语法能力考查要求最高的题型，需要考生具备扎实的语法基础和一定的逻辑分析能力。本文将结合实例分析讲解GMAT句子改错题的解题思路和方法技巧。

GMAT句子改错题(sentence correction)，是整个GMAT考试中对考生英语语法能力考查要求最高的题型，也往往是中国学生最为头疼的一类题目。没有扎实的语法基础和一定的逻辑分析能力，想要做好句子改错题难度极高。如何提升GMAT句子改错题的解题能力?下面小编就为大家整理了一些经典例题，结合实例分析为大家讲解GMAT句子改错题的解题思路和方法技巧。

实例题目：

Outlining his strategy for nursing the troubled conglomerate back to health, the chief executive’s plans were announced on Wednesday for cutting the company’s huge debt by selling nearly $12 billion in assets over the next 18 months.

(A) executive’s plans were announced on Wednesday for cutting the company’s huge debt by selling nearly $12 billion in assets over the next 18 months

(B) executive’s plans, which are to cut the company’s huge debt by selling nearly $12 billion in assets over the next 18 months, were announced on Wednesday

(C) executive’s plans for cutting the company’s huge debt by selling nearly $12 billion in assets over the next 18 months were announced on Wednesday

(D) executive announced plans Wednesday to cut the company’s huge debt by selling nearly $12 billion in assets over the next 18 months

(E) executive announced plans Wednesday that are to cut the company’s huge debt by selling nearly $12 billion in assets over the next 18 months

选项分析：

(A)executive's plans were announced on Wednesday for cutting the company's huge debt by selling nearly $12 billion in assets over the next 18 months

【错误1】修饰成分：“Outlining his strategy for nursing the troubled conglomerate back to health”本意上应做“announced”的伴随状语，因此其逻辑主语应与“announced”相同，因此其后连接的主谓结构中，做主语的本应为“executive”，而非“executive's plans”。

【错误2】句子意思：“plans”和“for cutting”搭配使用表意逊于(D)中“plans”和“to cut”搭配，因为“to do”结构能可用于更加合理地表达“目的”的含义。

(B)executive's plans, which are to cut the company's huge debt by selling nearly $12 billion in assets over the next 18 months, were announced on Wednesday

【错误1】修饰成分：见(A)中【错误1】。

【错误2】简洁明了：“plans, which are to”中的“, which are”不具有简洁性，如果将其去掉完全不影响表意

(C)executive's plans for cutting the company's huge debt by selling nearly $12 billion in assets over the next 18 months were announced on Wednesday

【错误】句子意思：见(A)中【错误2】。

(D)executive announced plans Wednesday to cut the company's huge debt by selling nearly $12 billion in assets over the next 18 months

【正确】 “plans to cut”正确使用了“plan to do sth.”的固定搭配(其中“plan”作动词或名词均可)，“Wednesday”即便不合“on”连用组成“on Wednesday” ，也可以用作表时间的状语。

【大意】在概述他使一个麻烦重重的集团企业恢复健康的战略时，总裁与周三宣布通过在未来18个月出售120亿美元资产以价格低公司巨额债务的计划。

(E)executive announced plans Wednesday that are to cut the company's huge debt by selling nearly $12 billion in assets over the next 18 months

【错误】简洁明了：类似地，见(B)中(2)“that are”没有任何意义，完全可以去掉。

解题思路：

“Outlining his strategy for nursing the troubled conglomerate back to health”打头意味着只有“executive”才能做其后主谓结构的主语，立即排除(A)、(B)、(C)。

“plan”完全可以直接与“to”搭配，两者之间加入“that are”不具有简洁性，因此(D)、(E)中选择(D)。