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GMAT高分范文转写改写5大常用技巧解析 跟不地道的写法说再见

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摘要:GMAT写作备考中参考借鉴范文是不错的方法,但如果借鉴过度就有变成抄袭的嫌疑在考试中直接被判雷同。因此,考生需要学习一些转写改写范文的技巧,同时部分不地道的写法也需要一起改正。本文将为大家解析GMAT高分范文转写改写的5大常用技巧。

GMAT作文高分不仅仅取决于文章的整体结构和逻辑思维,如何使用好词汇和句子也同样重要。很多同学虽然有着不错的英语写作基础,好词妙句的储备也可说充足,却往往因为不够地道的使用反而拖累了作文的整体得分。下面小编就为大家详细介绍一些写出地道的GMAT高分作文的方法技巧。

GMAT高分范文转写改写5大常用技巧解析 跟不地道的写法说再见图1

避免使用语意弱的“be”动词

1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如:

原文:The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab.

改写:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语)Or: The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语)

2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。例如:

1) 原文:The team members are good players.

改写:The team members play well.

2) 原文:One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness.

改写:One worker's plan eliminates tardiness.

3、在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中,把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。例如:

1) 原文:There is no opportunity for promotion.

改写:No opportunity for promotion exists.

2) 原文:Here are the books you ordered.

改写:The books you ordered have arrived.

多用语意具体的动词,保持句意简洁明了

例如:

1、原文:My supervisor went past my desk.

改写:My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.

2、原文:She is a careful shopper.

改写:She compares prices and quality.

尽量运用主动语态

例如:

1、原文:The organization has been supported by charity.

改写:Charity has supported the organization.

2、原文:The biscuits were stacked on a plate.

改写:Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.

防止使用语意冗长累赘的词语

例如:

1、原文:My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.

改写:My little sister prefers chocolate milk.

2、原文:We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.

改写:We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.

3、原文:We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.

改写:We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.

4、原文:My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different stores.

改写:My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores.

杜绝滥用陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语

例如:

1、原文:They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.

改写:They will not agree to any of his proposals.

2、原文:I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall.

改写:I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall.

以上就是关于GMAT写作中写出地道高分作文的方法技巧介绍,希望大家能结合文中内容提升自己的写作技巧,在GMAT写作部分写出高分作文。

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