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GMAT句子改错题解题思路分析与实例详解(29)


GMAT句子改错题(sentence correction),是整个GMAT考试中对考生英语语法能力考查要求最高的题型,也往往是中国学生最为头疼的一类题目。没有扎实的语法基础和一定的逻辑分析能力,想要做好句子改错题难度极高。如何提升GMAT句子改错题的解题能力?下面小编就为大家整理了一些经典例题,结合实例分析为大家讲解GMAT句子改错题的解题思路和方法技巧。


实例题目:

Emily Dickinson’s letters to Susan Huntington Dickinson were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumbering her letters to anyone else.

(A) Dickinson were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumbering

(B) Dickinson were written over a period that begins a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ended shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumber

(C) Dickinson, written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and that ends shortly before Emily’s death in 1886 and outnumbering

(D) Dickinson, which were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother, ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, and outnumbering

(E) Dickinson, which were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumber


选项分析:

(A)Dickinson were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan's marriage to Emily's brother and ending shortly before Emily's death in 1886, outnumbering

【错误1】 修饰成分:非谓语动词“outnumbering”在本选项中作状语(动词的修饰语),其逻辑主语为“Emily Dickinson's letters”,与所修饰动词“were written”的主语相同,这意味着“outnumbering”是动词“were written”的伴随状语,根据与法要求,“doing”应伴随所修饰动词同时发生且同(逻辑)主语。有日常逻辑可知,本题中“outnumbering”(“数量超过”)不应伴随“信件背写”之一动作同时发生,因此修饰关系不合理。

【错误2】 句子意思:由日常逻辑可知,本句的句意重心更应该是“outnumbering”(“数量超过”),如(E),而非“were written”,因此“outnumbering”作修饰语表意逊于(E)。

(B)Dickinson were written over a period that begins a few years before Susan's marriage to Emily's brother and ended shortly before Emily's death in 1886, outnumber

【错误】 句子结构:“were written”和“outnumber”均为“Emily Dickinson's letters”的谓语动词,而两只之间不存在任何连接词,如“and”、“or”或“but”等,主谓结构组合方式有误。

(C)Dickinson, written over a period beginning a few years before Susan's marriage to Emily's brother and that ends shortly before Emily's death in 1886 and outnumbering

【错误】 句子结构:“written”和“outnumbering”均无法成为“Emily Dickinson's letters”的谓语动词,于是“Emily Dickinson's letters”失去谓语,主谓结构不完整。

(D)Dickinson, which were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan's marriage to Emily's brother, ending shortly before Emily's death in 1886, and outnumbering

【错误1】 句子结构:“were written”是“which”引导的定语从句中的谓语动词,而主句中“Emily Dickinson's letters” 失去谓语,主谓结构不完整。

【错误2】 平行结构:“and outnumbering”无法和任何结构搭配形成平行结构。

(E)Dickinson, which were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan's marriage to Emily's brother and ending shortly before Emily's death in 1886, outnumber

【正确】 “beginning”和“ending”正确地平行在了一起,“outnumber” 是“Emily Dickinson's letters”的谓语动词,两者构成了主句的主谓结构。

【大意】 Emily Dickinson给Susan Huntington Dickinson的信被写于从Susan嫁给Emily的弟弟后不久到Emily去世前不久,数量上超过了她写给其他任何人的信。


解题思路:

(B)、(C)和(D)句子结构有问题,立即排除。

(A)和(E)对比发现“outnumbering”作伴随修饰不合理。

因此选择(E)。

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